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Editing Example No. 5

Pen and paper

Richard Alex Jenkins

This is a Direct Message sent to a potential employer in the hope of getting work. It was diabolical and needed to be edited on almost every line.


The key changes have been highlighted. A second possibility is sometimes given and there are some rare hand claps 👏 for good work.


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> I am professional SEO writer last 2 years


= I have been a professional SEO writer for the last two years.



> I am working on different companies in different niches.


= I work with different companies in various niches.

= I have been working with different companies in various niches.



> I have a vast piece of knowledge in this writing field.


= I have a great deal of knowledge in the writing field.

= I have a great deal of knowledge in the field of writing.



> What you will get?


= What will you get out of it?



> 100% free Plagrism.


= 100% free from plagiarism.



> 100% human article.

= 👏



> Free AI.


= Free from AI.



> Well researched content


= Well-researched content.



> 100% client satisfaction


= 100% client satisfaction.



> Fast delivery


= Fast delivery.



> Please let me know any service  for writing.


= Please let me know if you have any writing services.



> Best regards


= Best regards,



> Name

= 👏





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