Editing Example No. 5
Richard Alex Jenkins
This is a Direct Message sent to a potential employer in the hope of getting work. It was diabolical and needed to be edited on almost every line.
The key changes have been highlighted. A second possibility is sometimes given and there are some rare hand claps ð for good work.
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> I am professional SEO writer last 2 years
= I have been a professional SEO writer for the last two years.
> I am working on different companies in different niches.
= I work with different companies in various niches.
= I have been working with different companies in various niches.
> I have a vast piece of knowledge in this writing field.
= I have a great deal of knowledge in the writing field.
= I have a great deal of knowledge in the field of writing.
> What you will get?
= What will you get out of it?
> 100% free Plagrism.
= 100% free from plagiarism.
> 100% human article.
= ð
> Free AI.
= Free from AI.
> Well researched content
= Well-researched content.
> 100% client satisfaction
= 100% client satisfaction.
> Fast delivery
= Fast delivery.
> Please let me know any service for writing.
= Please let me know if you have any writing services.
> Best regards
= Best regards,
> Name
= ð
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